Write a letter to a character in your book
Dear Harry Potter,
my name is Curtis Lonoja and this is my first year in Hogwarts. I am also in Gryffindor! I am sending you this letter to ask for some advice as I already said this is my first year and I am very stressed.
The first piece of advice I am asking for is, which teachers actually give homework, which ones are strict and maybe some personal information about them. I already heard about professor Snape so you do not need to tell me stuff about him. Apparently he is a horrible person and only students in Slytherin are liked by him.
If you do reply to me I want to thank you in advance because this information will be used effectively. One day I would like to become a legendary wizard like you.
Yours sincerely,
Curtis Lonoja
Good job with this letter, I love how you included names from the book to make the letter more realistic. Unfortunately, I did notice that you didn't put a capital letter where it was necessary. Maybe next time you could not use the word "stuff" as it doesn't describe a lot and is a very broad word.
RépondreSupprimerOk thank you. I will take these comments in mind.
RépondreSupprimerGreat!
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